- Feb 21, 2023
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you want a battle ? i'll give you a war .
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/ mentions of gore, not in detail, but enough to give you some visual of what happened, there will be a summary at the end !
Dovepaw had followed Thistlefang out of camp, nervousness churning at his stomach, cursing his stupid mouth, letting slip the few things his mentor implemented. He wanted to prove that he was better than everyone by taking in a useless apprentice and turning him into the perfect warrior. That didn’t exactly happen, but the freckled tom was getting better. He was finally finally seeing improvement, working tirelessly until his bones ached and begged for rest, but he always refused. Thistlefang was cruel but effective, willing Dovepaw to become someone he wasn’t.
No longer did he bounce with joy, but hide, shrouded in darkness willing his palpitating heart to stop crying out. His eyes lost their shine, their curiosity, replaced by permanent tiredness that weighed him down, collapsing in a furry heap until his mentor snarled for him to get up and stop acting like a kit.
He stumbled to a halt, watching his mentor with barely concealed fear, skin shivering in anticipation as he stalked, sprouting out curses, directing a heated gaze towards him. He flinched, curling into himself with a whimper when everything stopped.
Dovepaw stiffened, knocked on his side as teeth ripped and ripped into marred flesh drawing a loud shriek from the apprentice, crying out because it hurt. He begged with tears leaking from his eyes because he could be better. He wouldn’t let Thistlefang down again. Please. Please! His body withered, back legs kicking uselessly into the warrior’s stomach, muscles quivering from the sudden spurt of energy.
“P, Please! I’ll be good!” He cried out, kicking the warrior and scrambling away. He didn’t get far, feeling his mentor’s acid breath brush against his cheek when claws sunk deeper, blood spilling out from wounds like pelting rain, saturating the ground.
He choked, willing tired limps to fight. He felt his vision whiten, blistering pain running through his body, searing his nerves as teeth sunk into his neck. I’m sorry mama. Were his last thoughts, before nothingness.
/ dovepaw let it slip of thistlefang's teaching methods, having become super guarded and pretty much drew away from everyone until thistlefang took him somewhere and killed him before bolting. your characters are more than welcome to have been the ones that dovepaw was talking to during his last moments alive !
Dovepaw had followed Thistlefang out of camp, nervousness churning at his stomach, cursing his stupid mouth, letting slip the few things his mentor implemented. He wanted to prove that he was better than everyone by taking in a useless apprentice and turning him into the perfect warrior. That didn’t exactly happen, but the freckled tom was getting better. He was finally finally seeing improvement, working tirelessly until his bones ached and begged for rest, but he always refused. Thistlefang was cruel but effective, willing Dovepaw to become someone he wasn’t.
No longer did he bounce with joy, but hide, shrouded in darkness willing his palpitating heart to stop crying out. His eyes lost their shine, their curiosity, replaced by permanent tiredness that weighed him down, collapsing in a furry heap until his mentor snarled for him to get up and stop acting like a kit.
He stumbled to a halt, watching his mentor with barely concealed fear, skin shivering in anticipation as he stalked, sprouting out curses, directing a heated gaze towards him. He flinched, curling into himself with a whimper when everything stopped.
Dovepaw stiffened, knocked on his side as teeth ripped and ripped into marred flesh drawing a loud shriek from the apprentice, crying out because it hurt. He begged with tears leaking from his eyes because he could be better. He wouldn’t let Thistlefang down again. Please. Please! His body withered, back legs kicking uselessly into the warrior’s stomach, muscles quivering from the sudden spurt of energy.
“P, Please! I’ll be good!” He cried out, kicking the warrior and scrambling away. He didn’t get far, feeling his mentor’s acid breath brush against his cheek when claws sunk deeper, blood spilling out from wounds like pelting rain, saturating the ground.
He choked, willing tired limps to fight. He felt his vision whiten, blistering pain running through his body, searing his nerves as teeth sunk into his neck. I’m sorry mama. Were his last thoughts, before nothingness.
/ dovepaw let it slip of thistlefang's teaching methods, having become super guarded and pretty much drew away from everyone until thistlefang took him somewhere and killed him before bolting. your characters are more than welcome to have been the ones that dovepaw was talking to during his last moments alive !
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