- May 29, 2024
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SHOULDA TAKEN A BREAK, NOT AN OXFORD COMMA
the stars must have hated them. they must have– because why else would they be put on a patrol with laurelpaw, a cat who has been known to talk just a little too much on patrols. it's not like it's a bad thing necessarily, but anytime they go through their patrols, especially when in tunnels, they enjoy the sanctity of the peace. if their old mentor were still alive... he'd at least try and take into account of splinterpaw's sensitivity to the loudness of the world. they're not sure how scorchstar would, or what rather, do with it. scorchstar was their aunt, their kin and probably the one their closest to outside of their littermates, and father, but she's still their leader. hardly seems like she'd be the type to coddle anyone, even if kin.
their gaze moved over to laurelpaw with a stern and agitated look in their eyes. why was she talking? did she have to keep talking? way to ruin the peace. they felt their claws dip into the cold ground, ears pinning back further as they grumble beneath their breath, tail lashing back and forth. they're honestly trying to keep their cool, but with how close they are to the noise, it's hard. it's not like they hate talking– they just hate it when it's loud and close to them.
"must you be... so annoying? this is a patrol, not a meow fest. be quiet."
// pls wait for @laurelpaw !!
their gaze moved over to laurelpaw with a stern and agitated look in their eyes. why was she talking? did she have to keep talking? way to ruin the peace. they felt their claws dip into the cold ground, ears pinning back further as they grumble beneath their breath, tail lashing back and forth. they're honestly trying to keep their cool, but with how close they are to the noise, it's hard. it's not like they hate talking– they just hate it when it's loud and close to them.
"must you be... so annoying? this is a patrol, not a meow fest. be quiet."
// pls wait for @laurelpaw !!
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