- Jul 24, 2023
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CW/ Prey animal death and mutilation mention
@BLAZESTAR I decided on a simpler start and the more it progresses I'll flesh out his feelings!
Aggravation etched itself plainly across the feline's scraggly features, lone blue eye glaring down at the group of battered mice before him. The tumultuous thoughts swirled in his mind, self-directed and heavy with a sense of inadequacy. Pathetic. He seethed, facing the harsh reality of his hunting skills falling flat. No skyclanner would ever find this catch delectable much less acceptable so he was at a loss on what to do. Back in the streets, he'd been a skilled scavenger, rummaging through trash cans or employing a single sweet, pleading eye and chubby cheeks to coax older twolegs into offering him their scraps. Those days were gone now, replaced by the unforgiving wilderness and the merciless judgment of the hollow.
Maybe things aren't so different here than the alleys. It was a grim realization but something that had been there at the back of his head for awhile.
No longer was there anyone to cry to, no sweet façade of kittenhood to exploit for personal gain. It was just him and the unforgiving terrain, a raw testament to his shortcomings. This is driving me out of my mind! The exasperation clawed at him, a nagging born of his own eagerness. This was the third mouse he'd managed to snare, only to brutally mutilate it beyond recognition. Dog's enthusiasm had certainly betrayed him, his zeal outstripping his coordination.
The absence of a secondary eye compounded the challenge, making visual coordination all the more elusive. Instead, he relied strictly on his senses of hearing and smell, his greatest allies in this endeavor. The moment the sweet scent of prey hit his nose, it was like a switch flipped, propelling him into a frenzied desperation. He'd thrashed around the pebbled terrain, clambering and digging to unearth his elusive prey from their rocky crevices.
Now, all he had to show for his efforts were three pitifully mangled mice and a sour belly full of irritation. Not even a peep could be picked up amongst the stone's surrounding him and left the former loner bitter. Dog lolled his head back and gazed up at the sky while muttering aloud to himself. "I'm fully grown and still can't hunt right. What a joke." A low growl rumbled in his tufted chest, a manifestation of his simmering irritation. He looked back down to continue glaring at the pitiable remnants of his catch, orange and white fur bristling with a blend of exasperation and dejection.
@BLAZESTAR I decided on a simpler start and the more it progresses I'll flesh out his feelings!
Aggravation etched itself plainly across the feline's scraggly features, lone blue eye glaring down at the group of battered mice before him. The tumultuous thoughts swirled in his mind, self-directed and heavy with a sense of inadequacy. Pathetic. He seethed, facing the harsh reality of his hunting skills falling flat. No skyclanner would ever find this catch delectable much less acceptable so he was at a loss on what to do. Back in the streets, he'd been a skilled scavenger, rummaging through trash cans or employing a single sweet, pleading eye and chubby cheeks to coax older twolegs into offering him their scraps. Those days were gone now, replaced by the unforgiving wilderness and the merciless judgment of the hollow.
Maybe things aren't so different here than the alleys. It was a grim realization but something that had been there at the back of his head for awhile.
No longer was there anyone to cry to, no sweet façade of kittenhood to exploit for personal gain. It was just him and the unforgiving terrain, a raw testament to his shortcomings. This is driving me out of my mind! The exasperation clawed at him, a nagging born of his own eagerness. This was the third mouse he'd managed to snare, only to brutally mutilate it beyond recognition. Dog's enthusiasm had certainly betrayed him, his zeal outstripping his coordination.
The absence of a secondary eye compounded the challenge, making visual coordination all the more elusive. Instead, he relied strictly on his senses of hearing and smell, his greatest allies in this endeavor. The moment the sweet scent of prey hit his nose, it was like a switch flipped, propelling him into a frenzied desperation. He'd thrashed around the pebbled terrain, clambering and digging to unearth his elusive prey from their rocky crevices.
Now, all he had to show for his efforts were three pitifully mangled mice and a sour belly full of irritation. Not even a peep could be picked up amongst the stone's surrounding him and left the former loner bitter. Dog lolled his head back and gazed up at the sky while muttering aloud to himself. "I'm fully grown and still can't hunt right. What a joke." A low growl rumbled in his tufted chest, a manifestation of his simmering irritation. He looked back down to continue glaring at the pitiable remnants of his catch, orange and white fur bristling with a blend of exasperation and dejection.
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