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Crouched low to the ground, Featherpaw had confidently split a little distance from her hunting patrol. Instead of scrambling after a rabbit, he'd sensed a different type of prey snuffling nearby... even if it was just a field mouse, it was a meal. What he lacked still (frustratingly, for how much he laboured) in speed, Featherpaw would make up for in masterful tracking. Certainty drenched her movements- her nose was low to the ground, deep breaths drawn in through her nostrils.
The mouse's scent flowed through her- she knew she was close, so very close- and woven with that distinctive oblivious prey-scent was the strong, floral smell of new-leaf. It was a new scent to the marble-striped tom, born when leaf-fall began, raised in the rainy and snowy conditions of the colder moons. He caught sight of a mousy scrap of fur through the long grass, and in preparation took a deep, long breath with honeyed flowers seeped within, and he was ready all until...
"ACHOO!" It burst from him before he could register its hurtling. Featherpaw, usually the first to complain about noise, felt brambled of humiliation begin to wrap around his throat. And to make it worse... she heard the pitter-patter of little paws too, as her prey took to the hills. Horned ears pinned against her skull, face wrinkling in anger- and in a moment of blinding rage, Featherpaw kicked a dandelion-clock and watched wispy, white wishes waver away on the wind.
The mouse's scent flowed through her- she knew she was close, so very close- and woven with that distinctive oblivious prey-scent was the strong, floral smell of new-leaf. It was a new scent to the marble-striped tom, born when leaf-fall began, raised in the rainy and snowy conditions of the colder moons. He caught sight of a mousy scrap of fur through the long grass, and in preparation took a deep, long breath with honeyed flowers seeped within, and he was ready all until...
"ACHOO!" It burst from him before he could register its hurtling. Featherpaw, usually the first to complain about noise, felt brambled of humiliation begin to wrap around his throat. And to make it worse... she heard the pitter-patter of little paws too, as her prey took to the hills. Horned ears pinned against her skull, face wrinkling in anger- and in a moment of blinding rage, Featherpaw kicked a dandelion-clock and watched wispy, white wishes waver away on the wind.
Spring is in the air! But unfortunately, so is loads of pollen. Write about how your character reacts to this change in the air!
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